The Birthday Party!!
BY ERIC
On Saturday it was my mums birthday at Valentines. My aunty came over and we went to Valentines.
After we ate food. I was surprised what I ate. I ate chips and chicken and noodles I ate that all. When I finished eating I smelt food that made me go for more. Then I ate ice cream, pavlova and kiwi fruit. I ate the cake like a monkey eating a banana. At Valentines I saw people eating ice cream. I saw my cousin eating shrimp, rice, samosa and chips. I saw my mum and auntie drinking coffee. I saw people eating bread with butter and coffee. The cake tasted nice. The cake has big flowers and small flowers and they were different colours. It was wonderful.