The most wonderful place!
The most wonderful pace I have been is Samoa.I went there for my aunties funeral. After we went to the church and we put the coffin in the hole then we hid a big vest. Then I went to the beach.
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I think Samoa is a wonderful place too Eric. The water is so warm I wanted to swim all day.
ReplyDeleteThat's a very nice piece of writing Eric, I too have been to Samoa and it is an amazing place I really would like to go back. By the way I'm really sorry to hear about your Aunty.
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