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Monday, 14 March 2016

Narrative Kayak Trip Story

Kayak Trip

On a fine afternoon Dave and his Dad decided to go camping at Tamaki river, because Dave wanted to go camping and kayaking. They first got their tent and put it up, then got the kayak and put it in the river.

They got ready and went inside the kayak. Then they started padding and got up to to a bridge, the kayak flipped over because they couldn't make the turn. Dave had small head injury.

Then Dave told his dad “Help me to push the kayak around again!” They had to try three tries to flip the kayak over. They both were relieved that they survived.


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This is my writing that I did with Ms Kirkpatrick.

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