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Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Using DRART

LI: To write a stretched sentence
LI: To use DRAFT to check our sentences.


Who:Little boy
What:Tripped aggressively
When: As the hedges grew
Where:The ground
Why: Trying to escape him


First: As the hedges grew the little boy but tripped aggressively landing face first on the ground, trying to escape him


Draft Sentence: As the hedges grew the little boy but tripped aggressively landing face first on the ground, trying to escape the dark figure known as “him”...

Today, LS2 were reusing stretch sentences but fixing our mistakes & errors by using DRAFT.


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