Describe the scene.
It was a freezing winter morning there were kids running up on a hill to the trees. At the bottom of the hill Byron is looking back to the farm at the burglar, the burglar had a back coat on with a black face mask. He was holding a knife in his hand. When the girls started chatting their faces looked like they were not scared at all.
This is my narrative, We had to look at this picture that my teacher provided me and we had think of 8 ideas that we had to write a narrative about the picture.
Hi Eric, who have done well making up your own narrative but you should go and double check before you post things on your blogs because you have some spelling mistakes and one sentence doesn't make sense.
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