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Wednesday 21 September 2016

Harris Burdick - Wright

Something Under The Rug:
Once upon a time there was a man in his 50’s living in his home upon the highest mountain in the world. It was a really long night during the DAYLIGHT SAVING. His special talent was to stay awake for 1 whole week. He was sleeping on his bed then there was a sound coming from the living room. He said “ IS SOMEONE GOING TO BREAK INTO THE HOUSE.”  He felt scared and angry because one might kill them and other is because it was breaking his beauty sleep. He in the living room and there was something under the rug. “IS IT A RAT OR A MOUSE.” He lift up the rug and it was rat.

The END

Today for writing we had to use some pictures from Harris Burdick to start out writing. Mrs Anderson told us to use the six sentence starts. We did this to practice our skills with our writing. So then I made up a story and used all of the things make this.

2 comments:

  1. Well done with your narrative. Really interesting to read it. Keep up your good work.

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