For this task I to image that I was people to arrived by waka to New Zealand. Then I had to make a peom. Here is my poem:
I am roying fast
My heart is beating
I take my first step on New Zealand
I am really happy that,
we found a New Country
Hi Eric,
ReplyDeleteI was very intrigued by the poem you wrote about when you arrived in New Zealand. I could paint a clear picture of you arriving in New Zealand. I like the punctuation you have added. I also like how you added a image of a waka.
- Zahra
Hello Eric
ReplyDeleteThe poem you wrote about when you arrived in New Zealand is great! I like how you made it blue and put a couple of spaces between each line - it makes it easier to read. Well done.
Daniel
Talofa Eric!
ReplyDeleteWell done on making such great progress with the winter Learning Journey! I hope you have been learning lots about our beautiful Aotearoa and having fun along the way!
I love the way you have laid out your poem and attached a picture for the reader. It shows you have taken the time to think about the presentation of your poem. I think I would be pretty happy to have bee the first people to discover New Zealand too!
Ka pai Eric!
Nicky :)
Thank you for your comment Nicky.
DeleteHello Eric, I like how you wrote your poem in a different colour. It is easier to read. I also like how you have added an image of a waka to go with your poem. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Eric. I really like your poem. I really like how you've added an image of a waka. Keep up the great Winter Learning Journey activities.
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